Essay Narrative

The First Accident

I studied at SMAN 8 Denpasar when I was in senior high school. It’s located on Gatot Subroto street. I got many friends there and I was so happy. One day, my school and the other school in Bali joined a volleyball competition in the stadium in lapangan Buyung. The competition called PORJAR. My friends participate in this competition. I was really excited because my friends participated in this competition. So I decided to go to the stadium with my friends. After I went back home from the stadium, I got an accident. This is the first time I got an accident when I was in senior high school.

The weather was so hot, but it did not stop me to watch my friends’ competition. I wanted to go to the stadium with my friends. They were Nela, Bobby, Agung, and Desi. I waited my friends at my home to pick me up to the stadium. After my friends arrived, we went to the stadium together. I rode my motorcycle by myself. Because the street to the stadium was so crowded, I rode my motorcycle carefully. I followed my friends in front of me because I forgot the way to the stadium. About 30 minutes later, I arrived at the stadium. I searched a good seat to watch the competition comfortably. From a distance, I looked my friends did preparation. I really couldn’t wait to watch my friends’ competition. After I waited quite a long time, the competition began. The competition was so exciting. I watched seriously. I focused on Melani, one of my friends who played volleyball in this competition. She is the best volley ball atlethe in volleyball at my school. She scored a lot in this competition, and finally she made the team won this competition. I was happy to know that.

I congratulated my friends. I was proud and happy to see their team won the competition. They played the competition very good, especially Melani. I also felt satisfied with how they played in the competition. After I congratulated my friends, Boby, Nela, Agung, Desi, and I waited Melani because she wanted to go back home together. We sat on the seat near the exit. We waited just a few minutes. Then, Melani came to us with  her bag on her back. After that, we went to the parking area where we parked our motorcycle. Parking area looked so deserted because many participants and spectators left the stadium. I stood beside a motorcycle which had pink color and there was a brand named Vario. That was my motorcycle. I rode my motorcycle and followed my friends in front of me. We went back home. On the way, my friends rode their motorcycle so slowly. I wanted to go back home immediately because I was tired after watching the competition so I overtook and preceded my friends. Unfortunately, I got wrong way. When I met traffic light, I should turn left, but I rode my motorcycle straight ahead. I was panic at the time. I went back to the street that I passed before. I rode my motorcycle very fast. Suddenly, there was a man crossed the street. I braked my motorcycle abruptly. After that, I fell down. My motorcycle scretched, and I got wound on my right foot and knee but I didn’t feel hurt at the time. I got an accident in front of  machine shop. There were 2 men from a machine shop helped me move to sit near the shop. I cried there because I was afraid that my mother would get angry to me. Then, a woman came and helped me to clean my wound. I didn’t know why my wound didn’t feel hurt.

I called my friends to pick me up to go back home. Nela and Desi came to help me and I went back home with Nela while Desi followed us. On the way back home, I looked at my foot anxiously. I was also afraid that my mother was shocked when she saw my wound. I was thinking it until I arrived at home. My friends ring the bell and then my mother opened the gate. My mother was shocked when she knew I got an accident, but she didn’t angry with me. She asked me why I got an accident, I explained it to my mother. After that, my mother said grateful to my friends and my friends went home. Since after that we went to hospital. When we arrived at the emergency room, I felt so scared and anxious. I was thinking about what the doctor would do to my wound. In the emergency room, the doctor asked me to lay down on the bed. He cheked my wound. After that, the nurses cleaned my wound. It was so hurt. I cried to endure the pain. They put Sofra-tulle on my wound and bandaged it. My foot was swollen at the time so I was difficult to walk normally. Besides, I needed to take a rest at home about 1 week and I should check up my wound every two days.

            I got a lesson from my first accident in senior high school. I realized that I shouldn’t be panic and rode my motorcycle very fast at the time. I should be more careful to ride a motorcycle and control my emotion when I got wrong way. So, if you experienced like what I wrote above, you should ride your motorcycle carefully and keep calm. Don’t ride or drive like I did. Be careful and keep calm so you can go anywhere safely.

Essay Descriptive 2

My Best Friend

I have a best friend. Her name is Meilani. I first met her when I was in junior high school. I used t study at SMPN 10 Denpasar and her too. We got a same class when we were first grade in junior high school. After graduated from junior high school, I met her in senior high school. We got the same class again when we were first grade in senior high school. Even though we weren’t in the same class again when we were second and third grade in senior high school, she is still my best friend. Even though we also study in different university, we always keep in contact. I have been friend with her about seven years. Because of that, I know her bad characteristics, good characteristics, and her appearance.

She has some bad characteristics that makes me annoyed her. She is a lazy girl. When she is on holiday, she spends her time a lot just for sleeping. She also does it when she has a free time. She rarely goes outside for jogging or strolling with other friend because she spends her free time just for sleeping beside that, she is also craven. She is afraid to sleep alone at night. So, she asks her sister to accompany her to sleep.

On the other hand, she has some good characteristics that can make me proud of her. She is a helpful girl. She always helps her mother to make a nasi jingo. Her mother sells nasi jingo to fulfill her family’s daily needs. She helps her mother to buy banana leaves in the morning, cook the rice, and wrap the rice by using banana leaves. Beside that, she is obedient. She always complies what her parents say because she really loves her parents.

She has a simple appearance. Her body is tall. Her complexion is light. She has a curly hair. She looks sweet with her curly hair. She usually wears jeans and shirt when she goes outside to hang out with other friends. Her fashion style is so simple but she still looks beautiful in a simple way.

I love my best friend and I know all about her. I know her bad characteristics, good characteristics, and her appearance. Even though she has bad characteristics that sometimes make me feel annoyed with her, I still love my best friend. I hope we will be best friends  forever.

Essay Descriptive

My Boyfriend

When I did Ratam in my faculty, I found many friends here. One of my friends was a boy who got a same group with me. I got a group named RRC and he also got a same group with me. When I looked at him at the first time, I felt that he was so strange. His act was so strange with other people. I couldn’t describe what strange his act looked like. I just felt that he was so strange at the time. Unexpectedly, he got the same class with me. Day by day we got closer until we were officially together. It was unpredictable because at the first time I looked him, I felt dislike with him because his act was strange. After I made friends with him almost six months, I found some reasons why I fell in love with him. Even though he was so naughty, he had a good characteristic and good appearance that can make me fell in love with him.

He is a naughty boy. After studied in the campus, he usually went to my boarding house to eat together or made our homework together. In my boarding house, he sometimes stole my foods when I went outside to buy something. Unfortunately, I realized it when I was hungry and he wasn’t in my boarding house. So, I was so angry with him. Besides, he also hid my key when I wanted to ride my motorcycle to go outside. It made me felt angry and tried to grab my key with anger. Sometimes when we did our assignment, he borrowed my pen, pencil, or eraser. And then, he forgot to give it back to me. I asked him to give it back to me, but he postponed to give it back to me. Finally, my stationery lost because he put my stationery carelessly.

On the other side, he has a good characteristic. When I feel so sad about my bad score in campus or the other problem in campus or my house, I share it with my boyfriend. He gives me some advises and supports. When I feel sad that I got a bad score in my test, he advises me to be patient and he asks me to keep study and pray to God. He can help me by his advises and supports, so I can solve and face my problem. He is also a humorist boy, so he can make me laugh and smile again.

For me, he is good looking. He knows how to choose and match some clothes to his body. His body is tall and he has dark complexion. Because of that, he doesn’t wear a cloth with flashy color, so the color doesn’t contrast with his complexion. He loves to wear short, jeans t-shirt and shirt. All of those things fit him well.

When I get closer to him, I know more about him. I know his bad and good characteristics. His bad characteristic is naughty. Because his naughtiness, I feel so angry with him. Even though he is naughty, he also has good characteristics. He can be my good listener, he is helpful, and funny. He is also good looking. I know that he is naughty, but his good characteristic and his appearance make me fell in love with him.

Essay Narrative 2

When My Bad Habits Change Into Good Habits

With no boyfriend, we can live freely. We can do whatever we want to do, we can go wherever we want, and we can go with whoever we want without prohibited by our boyfriend. All of them can happen when we have no boyfriend because there is no one cares about us, except someone who really close with us. It’s same with my experience. My life was free without my boyfriend. I didn’t really care about my appearance and there was no one asks me to care about my appearance at the time. I also had some bad habits, such as I was a spoiled girl. All of my bad habits changed when I had a boyfriend at the time. My boyfriend changed my bad habits.

The first time I studied at Undiksha, I didn’t have a boyfriend. I used to wake up late when I got a morning schedule. Because of that, I didn’t take a bath, I didn’t comb my hair and my body had a bad smell. My appearance looked so bad. It’s so untidy. I also wasn’t able to cook. I just can cook a fried egg, instant noodle, and the other instant food. It happened because I rarely accompany my mother when she was cooking. When I went back to Denpasar, I woke up late, so I couldn’t help my mother when she was cooking. When I wanted to go to market or supermarket in Singaraja, I used to ask my friend to accompany me. I never went alone except went to campus. I was a spoiled girl at time. I used to ask my friend to accompany me wherever I wanted to go except went to campus.

In second semester in my department, I had a boyfriend. He got a same class with me in my department. He was angry with me because my bad habits. He asked me to care about my appearance because my hair was untidy when I went to campus and my body smells bad.  He also told that he would be happy if I was able to cook. He also didn’t like me to be a spoiled girl. He wanted me to be an independent girl. All of his words were useful for my life in the future. He did it because he loves me.

Day by day, my bad habits had changed. I listened and did all of the words that he said to me. I tidy my appearance before I go to campus. I also use a perfume to make my body smells good. If I go back to Denpasar, I will learn to cook with my mother. I wake up early so I can help my mother to cook. I learn to be an independent girl. I try to do something by myself without depending my friend’s help such as go to market or supermarket by myself.

I have been dating with him about one a half years. My bad habits changed since I’m in relationship with him. I didn’t really care about my appearance, I wasn’t able to cook, and I was a spoiled girl at the time. Then, he came and changed my bad habits. I care about my appearance, I’m able to cook and I can be an independent girl. All of them happened because my boyfriend changed my bad habits.